Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Nanowrimo 2011 Day 22: Killer Victor Part 2

Okay, I was not going to go into detail about Victor St. James, but I just have to.  I mean, I detailed each of the Six Sexy Sisters and all it does is intrigues readers to want to read more, I mean, I hope!

Soooo, Victor St. James…so complicated.  Yes, he loves all the Kelly sisters, yes he feels more like their father than brother.  He should, he raised them!

Victor’s story begins when he is a kid, abandoned at age six in an alley in New Orleans, and found by the St. James.  They are an older white couple with no kids, so they decide to adopt him (actual more to this story…I haven’t written it yet, but it’s so deep).  So he is raised with a pretty good life, except his father is in the military and travels a lot, so they move around a lot.  They settle in Springfield, Missouri where his father decides to retire from the military.

He is sixteen when he arrives next door to the Kellys.  He is instantly mesmerized with them and spends a lot of time with them.  Even Mrs. Kelly adores him.  His mother, who was a stay-at-home mom, now travels on vacations with his father, leaving Victor, at seventeen, home alone.   He’s so busy with school, football and three different martial arts he doesn’t get into much trouble…well, if you don’t count the girls.

He dates nonchalantly, in the back of his mind knowing he is missing something.  Yes, that something is Sarena, but he is in denial about his feelings for her, thinking she is just like a sister to him. He is very close with all of the sisters, and they all have little crushes on him at various points in their life (seven year old Tenille is upset when Sarena and Victor start to date because she claims Victor is HER boy friend—and she was serious, LOL!)

Victor wanted to go to the military like his father, but his mother is the one that convinces him he wants a career that keep him home and close to family, so he goes to Missouri State University. At MSU, he develops the reputation that will follow him forever--Killer Victor.  Later, he decides that he will enroll in the Police Academy.  He becomes a force to be reckoned with, but a heart of gold when it comes to the Kellys.

I always make my guy characters guys I could fall in love with.  Victor is a winner!


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